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Whitman’s Redwoods

June 23, 2023

it’s all very eerie

this world tied together

by time zones and mapping grids

lashed by the electric hiss and the

static crackle of telephone wires and

underseas cables, tethered by the

ethered bend of radio and microwaves

when all i want is something ethereal

the whispering sound of leaves as

the eastern wind  calls forth the rain

but alas, perspective birthed the erecteral

arts, geometric space, a new scaffolding

of segmenting  boundary,  and the

sensual tumbled like Whitmanʻs redwoods

crashing into national  measurements

and a proclaimed detachment, a trumpeted

objectivity, an engineered consciousness

for our circumscribed democracies

and the earth crawled from beneath

the sliding scree, the scattered debris,

found itself anew as raw material

found itself anew as landscape

found itself anew as segmented ʻitʻ

and found itself enbureaued in scentless

energy budgets, entangled in colorless

concepts of photo-synthetic efficiency,

etcetera, etcetera, the numbers non-

living and non-continuous but run ʻvalue-

freeʻ by educated specialists, hip to the

selfish gene theory and the monetization

of their own worth, but alienated

from the rain-calling wind, alienated from

the yipping forests of foxy desire,  alienated

from the splashing currents of salmon

longing, leaving  our human world of com-

bustable complexities leafless, succumbing

to the crow-caw of ever-diminishing returns,

where is the sense in this?

i sit on a lanai  beneath the mellow soft-

shoe sounds of the rain pondering this

written word, should it be sung or litigated?

Does the erotic sensual world now bow

to our patterns of abstractions? i bow

to James Stephens who once did chant

the first and last duty of humankind:

to dance.

 

 

Teaser photo credit; Young but already tall redwood trees (Sequoia sempervirens) in Oakland, California. By Victorgrigas – Own work, CC BY-SA 3.0, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=16577471

Terry McNeely

i began writing, mostly poetry, shortly after my wife, Mickel, died in ʻ95. Death figured prominently in my thoughts, my own loss, my own alcohol abuse, the manʻs ecological destruction of a planet, the impoverishment of billions. Through these parallel dyings, i learned everything changes, there is nothing to hang onto and i came to find compassion, for myself and the larger world, and through compassion, i believe, we can find meaning in our lives, in our actions. To that end, i write.

Iʻve lived most of my life in northern california, until i moved to hawaiʻi in 2003, where i live on the big island in Hilo. I have worked at various jobs, mostly USPS, but also owned a small bookstore.


Tags: cultural stories, eco-poetry